Content: I had a hard time getting into your writing. There is really nothing wrong with it, it just didn't keep my attention. Most are quick daylogs and updates on plans for the days to come. Mostly it seems like a small place just to document days, and to keep your close friends updated.
I honestly was scared, because when I read your reasoning behind your name, I thought it would be all God, all day. But I was wrong. You take pride in
your love for your religious choice, but don't push it on others. Which I respect.
In a way you admit to holding back because you don't want your friends to read the details, which is fine.. but left me curious. I'm left just knowing the basic shell of who you are. [30/45]
Layout: Well, during the times I've tried to sit down and do this review, I've seen 3 layouts. I, myself, tend to change layouts randomly until I feel comfortable. Maybe you're preparing a better one now, but this plain blue one is quite boring. I've seen what you are capable of. I liked the "I feel sexy" layout. And the 3 doors down was great too. But gotta give you points for it be clean and simple, and easy to read. I do like those aspects. [12/20]
Mechanics: Mostly spelling mistakes. One I seen that was consistant was "tierd" instead of tired. Yea, there's others here and there, but nobody is perfect here, I'll be the first to admit I'm not either. [5/10]
Extras: Favorite verses, playlists, bio, cast, quotes, etc. There are some quizzes here and there mixed in with the writing. Nothing that stands apart. Nothing that kept me interested. I think more visuals would be nice, like pictures. Sounds like you have a good group of friends, pictures are always fun. [6/10]
Contact: Notes, Email, Guestbook, Tagboard. Sounds stalkable to me. [5/5]
Navigation: Very easy to find my way around. No complicated code words. Yay! [5/5]
Link: Found it in one click. I ♥ you. [5/5]
Favorite Quote: I think it would be this one: "I've longed for someone to fill this empty spot in my life; someone to love me here on earth where I can touch him."
Favorite Entry: This one. Great thoughts, you actually express emotional need, which any girl can pretty much relate to. Glad you decided to add this one from your old diary.
Return Trips?: Probably not.
Final Comments: Nothing much to include here. Except, on your "A lil about me" page you listed #4 as I draw on myself (sort of like cutting). And that bothered me. Drawing is NOTHING like cutting. I think it is a terrible comparison.
Extra credit: None.
Total: [68/100]
Reviewed by: Kate
