Content: I read your diary from 01-29-05 - 12:16 a.m. Rueben that entry. I am impressed by the fact that you have written your diary such a long time! First impression is that you really write short and good. You describe exactly how you're feeling, which I would beleive is exactly what all of us want for our diary in aftertime: "I am distraught and heartbroken beyond words." (and how beautifully written!) I like how you describe your daily life like, cutting it to the bone and let it stand. It feels that you are honest - even though you don't express feelings as much as I would have wished. You want to remember them, too, right? Remember, emotion is vital if you want to entertain a reader that doesn't know you in person. I think your diary would be a little more entertaining if I had known you in real life.
Sometimes, you make me laugh. Out of your stupidity your stupid formulations (I'm worse, I know...) and when you start on making an almost Bridget-type of diary. An example of a stupid formulation is this one: "It has been, unbelievably, a year and two days since the worst day of my life. I stood in the parking lot of Funset Boulevard and cried. My car was wedged beneath a parked semi-trailer." Haha. So your car broke. And I am really sorry for it, and I deeply apologize. But really: the worst day in my life? I understand that this must have been horrible for you, I can only just imagine, but seriously: I might have had taken you for some kind of cow when you express things in that way. I understand that you feel like that, but seriously: it's PUBLIC! --though I understand that this day was the point of no return in the short story called Heather's life.
In certain entries, I think: 'I love her!'. You are grateful for life, kind, helpful, and with a nice sarcastic twist on your writing. Other times - I fall into desperacy over how boring it is. I wouldn't say your life was boring. No life is. Maybe you should practise on pointing out the importance and skimm away the rest. But I, I get curious. Who is this girl?
FUCK IT. Av og til blir dagboka di så jævlig kjedelig at det er til å spå av! translation: Sometimes your diary get's so fucking boring, I could throw up. [30/45]
Layout: I don't like the photo. But as I scroll down, it's nice. I am not a kind of layout reviewer. It's ok I guess it's your diary I don't care. [12/20]
Mechanics: [10/10]
Extras: Good. Nice. [10/10]
Contact: OK, I won't contact you anyway. [5/5]
Navigation: Easy.[5/5]
Link: It's there. [5/5]
Favorite Quote: "I am so fucking lazy, you would probably cry if you could understand how much. I'm constantly looking for the easy way out, convinced that everything should come easy to me because some things in my life have come very, very easily. I hate going to class. I hate doing homework. I hate doing anything that has no direct merit for me, or anything that I see as boring. If I had it my way, I would probably spend my entire life in my room on my laptop. And then I would complain when I got bored. And this is the real reason I don't want to get a job - because I'm scared shitless that I would be too lazy to actually do my job."
Favorite Entry: I don't have one. This is a huge practical joke, ha ha..
Return Trips?: No. I could fall asleep. I guess it's just me not being able to concentrate enough!
Final Comments: OK.
Total: [77/100]
Reviewed by: I was nice.
