Abrasive Sweetheart Reviews
Bree
2005-03-06 (( 5:27 p.m.

Your star, it seems to shine above the rest

Content: I read your diary from January and as far we have come. You update often. Mostly daily updates, though sometimes a week between. It's ok. I dont feel that daily updates are necessary at all, and you balance it with not writing your entries too long. You quickly let us into your mind. You start writing in a poetic way, it reminds me of a book I read by coetzee. It's good that I dont have to read all your entries to understand your way of thinking. A few is enough.

What I first notice is that you are very into this guy. I get caught, I follow you into your crazyness about him. You express this in a good way. In some entries I get lost in your passion for him and I really think that you are lucky - though sometimes I find your enthusiasm for him overwhelming. I wait for the bang, your sadness and sorrow. As I read on, I'm afraid of what might happen, since he is your everything.

You write alot about Chris. He is your alpha and omega, and I understand how much he has ment to you. Still: anything else? You write very much about what goes on mentally, how you are feeling, it's a diary of feelings. For my satisfaction I would want a little bit more of daily life. You write 'I cried more today than I have in months'. Why? And also, how are the relations you have to your family, friends? As I said: it's often hard to catch up with what has happened. One moment you are happy, the other sad, then confused.

I really hope you get out of depression, for me it looks like a bad sircle, you're in a Chris pattern, it's all about him, it never stops. This hasn't anything about the content to do, it's you. It hasn't anything to do about the points. Whether you are a nice person or not (confused, depressed, frustrated?) has nothing to do with wether your content is good or not. [32/45]

Layout: I liked the layout better before you changed it? Who is that person? Girl or boy? Is it family or random? I dont like the photo it creeps me out. Sorry. Easy to navigate. I like the navigation system! [15/20]

Mechanics: you write well. it freaks me out that you dont write big letters in the beginning of sentences. i dont really care but i have to give you points for mechanical skills. 8/10]

Extras: LOTS! Great, you got it all, baby! Writings, aspirations, oneword, photoes, music library, quotes, reading log, schedule, reviews, surveys and last will. + a lot you have written about yourself. [10/10]

Contact: You've got them all! [5/5]

Navigation: Oh, did I write navigation on layout? Sorry. [5/5]

Link: Lots of them. We can contact your whole family and friends network + your inspirations sources. Great! [5/5]

Favorite Quote: "You look me in the eyes and tell me everything you love about who I am. But I don't think you've seen all of me. Have you noticed that I have a tendency to put other people down to make myself feel better? Or that I waste my days doing meaningless things?"

Favorite Entry: This one. I don't know why, but this one came right into my heart.

Return Trips?: Yes, I think. I want to know how things go on with Chris and you..

Final Comments: Nice diary.

Total: [80/100]

Reviewed by: Maud

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